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Monday, 6 February 2012

PEER REVIEW


So, this is a reflection on a Wiki that I marked which is Bianca’s. Her Wiki was informative and understandable which is obviously a good thing but not all pages were between 3 to 4 paragraphs which what she could improve on if she was to put her grade higher. She included some pictures and links to her work and the link worked but she could have inserted a video which is related to a subject, like for example, ICT. She could have included a link to her blog that she made in ICT to make her Wiki better.   What I liked about the home page was how the words she written gives a true reflection and description of her and how fun she made it sound. It included examples of her hobbies but she should have included examples of at least 2 things that she doesn’t like. She changed the original color and image to reflect her personality and to make it more appealing so that is another thing I liked about the Wiki. 

So she should improve on:
- Having three Paragraphs
- Including examples of at least 2 things the dislike
- Hyperlink of her blog
- At least 1 sound on at least 1 page (like a video)

Overall, the information she wrote was interesting to read and it was a really good Wiki! Here this is the link to her Wiki:
biancasrdigitalportfoilio.wikispaces.com 

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